The compare to Jacques Brel is of course an great compliement for me... But, you're right, the two main synth don't sound. I tried a single piano, it doesn't sound better... What can I do ?... I will success one day maybe, so I will try again and again !
Thank you so much for your com'
Friendly,
Richard. more…
The melody is nice, and sounds like something Jacques Brel would have done. But, I don't like the choice of the two main synth sounds. Have you considered a piano for the repeating arpeggio?
I know how to be 18 going on 20 but when unwell feel like 95 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!David.
The name of Marian's poem is ' Through the eyes of a child '.
Grandma tell me the stories of you as a child,
Running so free and running so wild,
In meadows of green bursting with flowers,
making chains out of daisies for hours and ho more…
I will read it. I don't promise that I could have the talent to make a song of every magnificient poems of Marian, but I'll try to !
Thank you, David. more…
Dear Richard,
There ia an ecological poem of Marian's something like Grandmother tell me where are all the.......
Wouldn't that also make a super song ? David. more…
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In response to: "A masterpiece." 220 days old
by richard-mathieu Pro
I notice you know your classical songs ! ;) more…
In response to: "A masterpiece." 220 days old
by la_spice [Member]
Thank you for reminding me of this:
http://myspace2.blog.co.uk/2009/04/14/is-it-raining-with-you-5943726/
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In response to: "A masterpiece." 220 days old
by la_spice [Member]
....falling on my head like a new emotion :) more…
In response to: "A masterpiece." 220 days old
by richard-mathieu Pro
here comes the rain again, falling on my head like a memory... ? more…
In response to: "A masterpiece." 220 days old
by la_spice [Member]
Not one of my virtues I'm afraid :roll:
Yesterday and today have been nice but rain is expected tomorrow :( more…
In response to: "A masterpiece." 220 days old
by richard-mathieu Pro
The summer is coming... be patient. ;) more…
In response to: "A masterpiece." 220 days old
by la_spice [Member]
Yes - apart from the weather!!!! :)) more…
In response to: "A masterpiece." 220 days old
by richard-mathieu Pro
Thank you. How are you, my friend, all is alright ? more…
In response to: "A masterpiece." 223 days old
by la_spice [Member]
Lovely :)
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In response to: "Thank you Marian." 223 days old
by la_spice [Member]
Thank you Richard - my pleasure
Mx more…
In response to: "To leave me..." 252 days old
by richard-mathieu Pro
The compare to Jacques Brel is of course an great compliement for me... But, you're right, the two main synth don't sound. I tried a single piano, it doesn't sound better... What can I do ?... I will success one day maybe, so I will try again and again !
Thank you so much for your com'
Friendly,
Richard. more…
In response to: "To leave me..." 252 days old
by SeasideMan Pro
The melody is nice, and sounds like something Jacques Brel would have done. But, I don't like the choice of the two main synth sounds. Have you considered a piano for the repeating arpeggio?
Tom. more…
In response to: "A new version." 314 days old
by richard-mathieu Pro
Sorry, I meant :"You know how to make me interested" ;) more…
In response to: "A new version." 315 days old
by richard-mathieu Pro
David will be the first.... AFTER you, my dear, of course !
Bises too ! more…
In response to: "A new version." 315 days old
by la_spice [Member]
Excusez-moi!!!! I think that IF you decide to use the words that I'd be the first to hear!!! :roll: :))
That said I'm not sure if this poem is suitable to put to music but I'm not the musician.
Bises encore!
Marian :) more…
In response to: "You didn't like my song...?" 315 days old
by la_spice [Member]
Yes I like it very much - thank you :)
Bises
Marian x more…
In response to: "A new version." 316 days old
by davidjohn Pro
I really hope you can do it. It might bring more fame for you and for Marian. David
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In response to: "A new version." 316 days old
by richard-mathieu Pro
If I write a music on these verses, you'll be the first to hear it, I promise, my friend ! more…
In response to: "A new version." 316 days old
by davidjohn Pro
I know how to be 18 going on 20 but when unwell feel like 95 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!David.
The name of Marian's poem is ' Through the eyes of a child '.
Grandma tell me the stories of you as a child,
Running so free and running so wild,
In meadows of green bursting with flowers,
making chains out of daisies for hours and ho more…
In response to: "A new version." 316 days old
by richard-mathieu Pro
You know how to make me interested ! ;) more…
In response to: "You didn't like my song...?" 316 days old
by richard-mathieu Pro
Thank you, Tom. I wish you a lot of happiness among my friends. more…
In response to: "A new version." 316 days old
by richard-mathieu Pro
A young man like you ? I can't believe it ! ;) more…
In response to: "A new version." 316 days old
by davidjohn Pro
I just meant my ears maybe aren't working very well !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! David.
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In response to: "You didn't like my song...?" 316 days old
by SeasideMan Pro
I like the changes you made, it works well now.
I just accepted your friend invitation.
Tom. more…
In response to: "A new version." 316 days old
by davidjohn Pro
Well the subject is so pertinent [ global warming etc ] that it could become a very well known song in no time at all . David.
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In response to: "A new version." 316 days old
by richard-mathieu Pro
I'm sorry, I didn't understand: "deafness overtaking", so I can't answer you correctly...
I'm so ashamed... more…
In response to: "A new version." 316 days old
by richard-mathieu Pro
I will read it. I don't promise that I could have the talent to make a song of every magnificient poems of Marian, but I'll try to !
Thank you, David. more…
In response to: "A new version." 316 days old
by davidjohn Pro
Dear Richard,
There ia an ecological poem of Marian's something like Grandmother tell me where are all the.......
Wouldn't that also make a super song ? David.
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In response to: "You didn't like my song...?" 316 days old
by richard-mathieu Pro
thank you, my friend. You like it now, or you simply recognize the job I made ? Sorry, maybe I insist a little too much...
P.S.: Are we friends on blog ? I don't think so... more…
In response to: "A new version." 316 days old
by davidjohn Pro
OK then its just me........ deafness overtaking .......... its very lovely don't get me wrong. David. more…